Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, 18 May 2020
Hello Neighbour vs Revenge of the sis
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Hi Oli. COol pic, it really gets my attention. I like the way you have laid out your text, this makes it easy to read. I haven't read the books, next time you could try and think of a question that requires more of an answer. Have you read many scary books? What is your favourite?
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DeleteHi Mr Gray my favourite book is the hello neighbour book ive read a few pages of each book i like the hello neighbour one a little more. But the revenge of the sis is good. I will also try to do the stuff.
DeleteAnd what is your favourite book?. blog out
I like Neil Gaiman books because he has an interesting way to look at things. Have you watched the STar wars movies?
ReplyDeleteIve watched probs all of them.
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