Thursday, 30 April 2020

Being Big




Today I hade to write a story on pobble 365 I picked Being Big  here are my questions and my answers that I made

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2 comments:

  1. Mark Maddren30 April 2020 at 13:28

    Kia ora Oli,
    I really enjoyed your story and the picture you created was what made me choose to look at your blog. I am keen to know what is in your humongousness potion, can you give me the ingredients?
    Just something to help someone with older eyes maybe a suggestion could be next time make the font size a bit bigger.
    Thanking you for sharing your writing.
    Nga mihi,
    Mark

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  2. Anonymous4 May 2020 at 11:17

    Hello Oli.
    this was a very nice story,I like how described him by saying he drank a potion of humongosness.
    maybe next time you could tell us if his past is a bright one.

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