- By helping people in football that are hurt.
- By being an up-stander.
- By not being mean in any way with germs
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 20 March 2020
Compassion
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hello Oli.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you include Football in your presentation.
I loved this because you thought about the questions you were putting in there.
You are good at thinking about the things you are putting down.
This is amazing because you made it bigger than normal size so it stands out.
You taught me that I should make my writing bigger.
Did you know that making words bigger makes it stand out more.
This reminded me of Football
Did you think about a little bit more detail.
Helpful:
Why did you think about adding in Football?
How come you put upstander in?
Next time, you could more words and describe some just a little more.
Maybe you could add a question at the end.
Why did you add Football in the presentation?
Do you think you’ll add some about Football next time?
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