Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 27 November 2019
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Talofa lava Oli, my name is Taylah and I come from Owairaka District School! This post about sand dudes is pretty awesome! I love the way your sentence's made sense and it sounded like you guys had fun! maybe next time you could make the writing size a bit bigger because it was a little hard reading your sentence's. Other then that it was good!.-
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Oli✌👌
Blog you later...👋👋