Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 27 September 2019
Swimming
Today I had to do a blog post about my swimming for the last two weeks .
My favourite part was when we got to use the flippers because ... I was very
fast when I was using them when I wasn't using them I was slow .
Can you see a face in the photo ?
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NICE!! next time add bodys but it is funny
ReplyDeletehi i like your post but add bodies it is cool. Next time add more detail
ReplyDeletebecause it is not enough
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DeleteHi Oli its Jackson I really like your blog post I also like how you hid the face on the lane rope. This reminded me of when I did my blog post about swimming. Next time you could add more of what we had to do before and after we went swimming. Why did you do faces why didn't you do the whole body? make sure to look at my blog.
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